Time.
Quick to go and never to return.
Patiently waiting for it to hurry.
To hoping it stops and never progresses.
We will never know when our time is up.
Early or Late.
Oh time so easy to fleet us.
So uncaring.
But once we recognise your value.
Your precious value.
Then and only then will we feel just.
Every second counts.
And never comes back.
Oh time.
You seem so uncaring.
But you just want us to care back.
You are so talented xo
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Thank you so much! You are so kind 🙂 xo
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not at all xo xo xo xo xo xo xo
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you should publish poetry …
you are very talented xoxoxxoxox
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Thanks!!! I’m hoping that can be possible one day. 😉 xoxoxo
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Sel Publish !!!!!!!!!!!! xx
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Oh I never thought about that! 🤔 I’ll definitely look into it. Thanks for the great idea😊
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Very talented!
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Thank you!😊
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Beautiful poetry….love the flow of words!
Hope you don’t mind if I tell you that there is little typing error in 9th and second last line! ‘Your value and Seem so’ Correct me if I’m wrong!
Nevertheless, I loved your poem. God Bless….
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Opps Thanks for letting me know! Glad you liked the poem 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Beautiful..i love how it flows smoothly from start to end..
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Thank you so much 😊
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this is amazing! hope you check my poem too
im a rookie poet https://pencillust.wordpress.com/
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Thank you so much 🙂 I checked out your blog and its pretty amazing too 🙂
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